Alright so you sent me nine different Funnels i’m gonna review them give you Feedback on the different styles and Funnels that you’ve sent me and also Give you a winner at the end of this Video so make sure you stay tuned what’s The entire thing and let’s see who won So we have number one for coaches get Your high converter done for your funnel In 10 days or less book a free call You put hero section here Immediately that’s interesting i would Probably put more about funnels like why They need funnels and then hero section After they know they need funnels And then maybe also The testimonial here doesn’t have to be Full width because you’re already coming From a strong Dark background into white text so the Reason is because you have one that’s Like a group like a and then the next One is just like super sharp so it’s Like a soft wave and then super sharp Immediately so what i would have is like Here’s the here’s why you need a funnel Here’s all the funnel types that we do Build here’s examples and then here’s What people are saying and then it’s Like here’s who we are here’s why we can Help you so you sell first sell them First on funnels and then why you can Help them And then from there
Okay this is good going into recent Funnel builds i do like this one for Example This one is clean this one It looks like a like it’s too busy and There’s no congruent branding so like we Could do a separate video on Just the overall like Separate individual pages one thing that You’ll notice here is with contrast and Colors like this one you can’t really See the Check marks you could do a darker or Actually what you could do is just have A white background because you have a Shadow just make this a little bit more Spread out so if you look at my shadows It’s more spread it’s softer it’s softer And it doesn’t have to be so sharp so White background with a soft shadow You’re in the right place if by the way This font right here [Music] Feels a little bit 2017. just me but i Would update that to something more 2022 2023 this is good always good to have Those numbers in there you don’t have to Use these you can delete the additional Boxes lines and everything that’s like Taken away it’s better to have white Space so just like Have that empty so people focus on the Thing like the headline and like the Case studies for example which is good
That’s really good everyone’s team Specialist this is awesome as well maybe Make the images a little bit bigger and Also congruent branding so if you want To have blue you put like a blue circle Behind all of them And then you also highlight one of the Texts so like the name for example That’s the thing with branding you want To have like two or three colors max Throughout the page you have like the Headline here and the background here The circle behind me and if the blue was The brand color then you would continue With like the the plus here the plus Sign would be blue as well actually i Think that would look pretty good if you Have a darker blue even darker than this With this background i think that would Look sick this is ready to make a real Change let’s build this thing together Overall pretty good but those are a Couple of Examples of what i would improve now This thing right here this has a really Good structure really good foundation For A home page for a funnel business what i Would say is this right here The graphic that you’ve added behind Here Takes away so much focus from the actual Pages And it’s also too little because you
Have these here click funnels only Allows the image to stay within the Column so what i would do is Take the css id Attach it to the css in the editor and Say i want this to be 700 pixels or 800 pixels and i want it To overflow Important and overflow the column and so It goes a little bit outside here and It’s bigger than it’s at least the same Size as the headline text and button And then here again instead of the the Line here i would just highlight these Sections with different like soft Shadows And for this one i actually would prefer A slightly blue shadow behind it i think That would look sick and then also the Logo i would try to to drag the logo Down here and just remove this all Together because i feel like this would Be perfect as a super bright background Just one background throughout the Entire page And then you have blue strong colors With funnels and stuff like that on the Actual page instead okay moving on need Examples take a look at our latest work By the way i like how clean the headline And the text is and here it’s okay to Have the graphics in the background Because it’s not really taking over too Much but what you could do is try to try
To put them to like 30 Opacity so just take it down a little Bit and maybe even adding a shadow to The funnel to lift it up from the Background so the graphic highlights That this is one funnel project but then The funnel lifts it up a little bit from The The background and you know it’s easier To focus on it But i do love these designs i like how Clean they are pretty much all of them This is also super good i would just Make this brighter want us to build your Next funnel super hard to read so Readability is a big thing schedule call To work yes build my next funnel Testimonials what some of our happy Clients say about us this is really good As well this is good this is awesome i Sometimes try to and i’m this again Being super picky i try to to get the Testimonials to be two lines both three Lines both four lines both it’s just you Know it’s a small detail doesn’t really Matter because it’s just like one tiny Difference in the rows but like let’s Say you had 10 different lines here and Three here you can delete some of the Testimonial Right or rewrite it a little bit so it’s Shorter and it just matches and it looks Better again not a big deal most people
Come on your page through mobile so keep That in mind as well when we’re doing These Sales page design done for your Copywriting let’s see here we got Two sections that are dark background so I would I’m okay with it like i like this but Maybe then add a support email in here Or phone number just for credibility Again Looks more legit actually use this color As the footer Add these with shadows on the page And then maybe add more about who you Are so a hero section what’s included in Your process or like the logical steps To get started so what i have here on This template is step one book a call Step two launch funnel step three scale Your business a couple of things there We got to move quicker because otherwise This is going to be a long long video We got one color two colors three colors Put the thumbnail and yes that’s a is an Important part i would rather see the Background and your page look like the Thumbnail where you have like navy blue And gradient headlines just like the Button here but then you have This this This and it starts to feel a little bit Capturing opportunity for this i would Reword that a little bit is your phone
Looking like they were built in i like This 1997 and looks Super scammy too so just reword it too Does your phone look like it’s built in 1997 and scare away people why because The guru said funnel design don’t matter I agree with you but i don’t like the Design of this so if you say that ugly Funnels don’t convert make sure you also Have every part of your funnel optimized This right here it is hard to to to read And it’s also not congruent with the Rest of the page so i would make it one Section that’s like a dark background if You want to have that and then you go Into a lighter background because you Don’t necessarily want to have the full Page super dark and if you do More more importantly just keep it to Two colors or like three so button could Be a contrasting color built on sound From your competition comment authority Convert high so again reward this a Little bit to build funnels that stand Out from your competition and actually Convert just simple language What you’ll get stand up from the crowd 30 minutes call make sure you separate The outcome and what you get so what You’ll get is not stand out from the Crowd what you’ll get is maybe a Done-for-you funnel that helps you stand Out what you’ll get is a 30 minute Personal 101 call with me what you’ll
Get is our conversion framework to make Sure that your funnel is converting or It could be what you’ll get is our 30-day conversion framework that helps You split test it after it’s launched Here’s a few of our recent funnel Designs Looks awesome I like this one this one is also decent Scrolling down i love the designs here So i think for you highlight the funnels More And delete the Fancy like four or five different colors At the top and just literally have like A main like the testimonial you can put At the middle or maybe the bottom so at The top have a section You Headline what you help them with how you Help them and how to contact you and Then logo and support email Right And then from there show the funnels and Then you can you know once they know Okay i want something like that i i want My brand to look like that i want my Funnel to look like this one that’s when You say here’s what you get when you Work with me have an image of you Building funnels and then everything That’s included i love the testimonials So you could definitely keep that in There as well but now we’re gonna move
Forward to the next one funnel panda Website design funnel building landing Page design Known to build powerful website through Top notch website custom theme designers And cost efficient services it sounds Like fiverr language no offense like it Sounds like professional talk and it’s Not direct response Sales copy so another way to say this Instead of website design follow the Landing page design Is you could say we build Websites and sales funnels to increase Your revenue very specific it’s known to Build a powerful website through top Notch website custom theme designers Cost efficient services instead say we Help online business owners like you Turn your vision into a Fully Functional high converting mobile Optimized Website or landing page something like That and like cost efficient that can Come later people don’t care about price They care about value unless that’s one Of your strengths so like i’ve seen People say We built down for you funnels launched In seven days for 500 bucks and if That’s your usp that you build them Super fast for 500 bucks then you can Include it i don’t personally want to
Compete on price and so i don’t put it In there i do like how simple this is Though i do like how how clean it is the Rest of it so you can see here but this Again it feels like more of a website Not a funnel Why we are best for you you have all the Things Services pretty much Not everything but a lot of different Things so personally i wouldn’t hire you To build my funnel because it looks like You’re building more websites and if i Hire someone to launch my online course Or if i hire you to launch my book Funnel or my webinar funnel i want to Hire someone who’s doing that Specifically and so maybe i would go With someone if i’m a real estate agent I would go with this Person right because i would like to Hire someone who’s specialized in my Industry so that’s why this one feels a Little bit like a fiverr website no Offense because design wise it’s clean Which is very important like you have White spacing around here i would say One of the things with the background Here Is it looks very different on a big Screen versus A smaller one so what you want to do With the background image here just put It as a two column row and you have the
Image here and then no matter what Happens with the screen it stays the Same and yes you can keep this one in The background changing but that you Know that would keep if you take a look At this right here You know i stay the same and so that’s Kind of what you want with the Background Moving on to the next one so we have Time for every everyone gotta go quicker I built beautiful sales funnels for Coaches course creators that convert no Offense but the font tells me that You’re Building beautiful funnels with ugly Fonts that convert just kidding but i Would change the font again this feels Like internet marketing in 2017. This however the image feels more modern This is what a designer looks like And so that is uh that’s good you have This special effect here which also Speaks to some people like hey you know What you’re talking about because you’ve Actually done some custom work on your Your page why hire us to build your Funnel check out portfolio creators Funnels for other coaches okay so big Lesson here Less is more Less is more if you do it better So built-in click funnels This right here and i see what you’ve
Done like this is mine right now i’m Redoing my existing portfolio but this Is the old one You can see that i have the main You know the main area of the funnel Highlighted and then the rest is like Sort of in the background right there so You know if you take a look at this one You’ll see if you like the theme of it But you also see that it’s longer than That you like the theme it’s longer than That and so for you on this one you’re Trying to show more of the page and You’re not showing anything like section One two three and it also looks like It’s lorem ipsum so it’s dummy text and It’s just you know fill out text It doesn’t add value to the image so if You want to present your funnels it Makes sense to just highlight this part Right here boom boom boom and have that As the main thing in the background you Have a longer part maybe this part so The goal is to highlight what you can do Not everything that you’ve done like Imagine if i uploaded 400 funnels to a Page uh i mean it could show credibility For sure and in my new funnel agency Portfolio page i am adding more funnels To just show More examples but i make sure to show Fewer and high quality versus just Spewing Everything out there like i’ve done this
This this and that and also make sure That you’re using the template correctly Because i i see this is one of the Templates that i give you in full-time Funnel designer This right here is meant to say You know home page funnel uh lead funnel And you You know you forgot to use that and so It looks like it doesn’t look as Professional since you haven’t like Added that in there it looks like you’re Using templates and so This one for example this one too with Two images it might sound stupid it Might sound silly but it’s very Important that you change this both text Image everything again imagine if you Took the time from the you know time you Put into this one And i’m sure if you know people watching This right now is like man chill you Don’t have to go so hard at people but It’s tough love that helps you become a Better funnel builder instead of Building this one and this one you could Have put the time into building this one And this one really good now am i saying That you wasted time no obviously not Just take the lesson and next time you Build make sure you put 30 minutes more to change out this image So now you have two different images Make sure you put
This on for example 45 minutes more to Write the text You don’t want to build portfolio Funnels concept funnels With half as effort Because it doesn’t matter where you tell A client like yeah you know i have a Couple of examples here in my portfolio But for you Man when you pay me i’m gonna put into So much more work i’m gonna work so much Harder because i’m getting paid no you Treat your portfolio as client funnels Because clients will see your funnels in Your portfolio this by the way doesn’t Fit in In my opinion with everything else And so make this smaller Change the font make it a light font Versus a bold one hard to read these Fonts and this also Much smaller book your free audit call Here i can’t barely see that so more Spacing way more spacing and then want To free audit you could delete the Background and just have a text that Says want a free audit of your current Site book your free audit call here Here’s what we’re going to cover on the Call Button big button and just clean that up All right next one up we go so i Actually reviewed this on the q a we do Like weekly coaching calls inside of
Full-time funnel designer and funnel Agency lab And so i already gave you some advice on This say good morning on up we go start Each day with positivity and purpose Here they a head start but then control Your morning with the help of a Community the first thing you think About when you hear community and Positivity it’s not Dark background and this which by the Way i do like this it’s unique It’s very unique uh do you’re thinking In terms of how the body works the brain The inside of your brain that’s kind of What i’m getting from it which i do like But If you instead change out the background To something more light Positivity purpose And then you have people so like Community right up we go is a community You want to have people in there just Put an image into a smartphone and you Have a smartphone mock-up around that You put A person here a person here person here So like different faces and maybe the App plus the faces and it goes out like A blockchain almost like a worldwide Connection thing that’s a community app Positivity in one form design is Aligning copy with the design to create Something beautiful that makes sense
When you look at it when you’re mourning To win your day this could be A part of the design but then let’s say You have this and you have a person Outside running in the morning and They’re smiling and it’s sunshine and You fit the image into the background of This and so the person is highlighted You can see they’re outside running but It kind of fades into the background of The page they’re smiling listening to Music you put like an icon of the app And then You have again you could have something With the brain or statistics whatever it Is that people get in the community i’m Not saying that they get An app they can download because i don’t Know it’s up we go is that an app that They can download But that’s the main thing another thing Like here for example you can see up we Go awesome See people don’t want to scroll down Half the page to see this stuff when They see it up we go they want to feel Like this is exactly what i’ve been Looking for let me try it out you know Free trial let me try it out the Step-by-step process here Join our community meet friends get Inspired follow us on instagram and Facebook i already mentioned this on the Coaching call but the first thing i’ll
Do is i will change this from follow us On instagram to Create new habits that actually serve You so join our community meet new Friends get inspired and then create new Habits and change your life that’s the Logical process Of Getting the outcome why they’re signing Up people don’t buy the product they buy The outcome even if it’s free they’ll Take a high ticket and so this process Shouldn’t just tell them to do the next Thing and the next thing like step four Buy groceries that make you healthy step Five remember to visit grandma it’s more About like here’s how you get results With the thing What if i’m not a morning person This is good but it could also be faq so Like five most commonly asked questions What our hosts say i would actually put The faq below these videos Who is this made for that’s good also The background like i said this This And this i would make more lifestyle Positivity and purpose Backgrounds That being said moving on to the next One have access to business leaders who Built two companies over 100 million i Don’t like the background i can’t really See anything i don’t like the font here
I’ll actually Do something like Simple one like this jakarta okay so Moving on three reasons why the insider Club leads you to profit Again make sure the text is congruent in Terms of what it says but also how long It is you want to make it just super Easy so they don’t even have to think About it do i need the insiders club Here’s three reasons get up close So this should be before i read this it Should be the first reason why they get Into this is to learn what he Has to offer what he knows his Experience to shortcut the time get up Close with joseph which are insider’s Access you asked his many questions you Want about entrepreneurship finance Mindset personal development innovation As a mentor who’s built two compass over 100 million okay so that’s what you need To have in there learn how joseph built A company worth 100 million you can ask Him any questions you want Exclusive growth content what’s growth Content the in-depth podcast episodes What really mostly probably need in your Business Okay so exclusive podcast content And then talk about what the podcast Content is so be more specific And direct with your copy and then Expand upon it in terms of like actually
Sell the thing okay why do i need more Podcast content well It’s uh Exclusive episodes that are not Available anywhere else usually inside This newsletter exactly so like get up Close with joseph this could mean Getting physically up close instead Maybe put get direct access to joseph What’s that worth a lot this right here I don’t know if i would put you have Shadow behind the white section But then you have this background here So maybe delete the white it looks like You have a vanilla white background i Don’t know maybe have white background Instead of these and Add the shadow to these so just go into The column Scroll down find the idea and add Shadows to each of these three instead Of having one big one That way you don’t have like two Backgrounds All it takes is just one decision So this right here are really for that Decision better way to put this is a Person of the coach that’s going to help You get what you’re typing so when You’re writing like everything that They’re going to get you’re ready to get This this this is this have so like in a Course we have the bundle with the Things that’s going to help you the
Offer but then here If it’s an insider’s club make sure that The people in the club are there so you Connect the two as you’re reading here’s What you’re gonna learn and all that Click here to join now from broke broken Dreams i like the image I want to join the club I love these as well i love these and This is okay too i don’t like the font And i would use more images but overall It’s pretty decent Now this is probably one of the best Ones reactive growth business growth Agency all-in-one marketing solution for Businesses grow a business online Profitably and predictably with our Rootless effective selling systems or we Don’t get paid amazing hook amazing Headline an amazing promise or risk Reversal because what’s the number one Thing that makes people not buy is risk You reverse the risk by saying hey we Don’t get paid if you don’t get results Love the design love the button love the Background super clean nice structure Let’s see with the graphics ads account Banned high cpc in our sale so people Aren’t buying i love that as well i Actually like that the headlines aren’t All like capital letters because it Feels more chillaxed Who we are How we can help you grow your business
Profitably and predictably so here’s Where i would go from like two different Sections to the third instead i would Have who are we how we can help you i Would have like Well you have that here perfect so i was Gonna say i would have like here’s the Pillars that we can help you with or if You do this maybe have bullet points Instead so one main headline you have The images of what you help people do And then you have Icon headline text icon headline text Icon headline text Icon headline text and then these three Sections would go there and then here’s What that means boom Everything included Or we don’t get paid let’s see if it Looks even better yeah exactly it looks Good here you can see they all also have Like the designed aesthetics the design Hierarchy of Having the headline different color Then the body text is also double the Size Papakomis not sorry about that my kids But yes having different size colors Between the two and then the icon it Makes it all great you could also do Like illustrations you could make it Overflow here at the top but i like it Claim your feet no obligation 30 minute Consultation this is awesome what you’ll
Discover in your free consultation make This a headline just like this one so Just duplicate this down here i love This maybe have an image who they’ll Talk to so that could help just have Like a face your face Or if it’s a salesperson i like this Very unique most people just have my My templates copied but you stand out by Having your own one brain training for Dogs funnel beautiful design And i really love this so well done well Well done even the 100 money back Guarantee is unique This very clean remember how i said Sometimes you can just add a shadow to Lift something up Very clean i love this We have one more and then we’ll find a Winner wall of funnels book a call you Can see here there’s a line right there That is either a shadow or a border at The top it is a shadow because i can Also see it here delete that delete Shadows from all the Backgrounds most of the time i would Also say delete the border because again Sometimes cleaner is better I can’t read this headline Helping businesses get as many clients Customers and sales they can possibly Handle even if i could read it which i Can you saw me just read it it doesn’t Make me want to buy the thing because i
Had to literally You know tell my brain to go for a run And then exercise reading the thing Coming back and rest you want it to flow This button right here is another thing It’s the same as the logo it’s the same As the Text it doesn’t stand out so i also Almost missed that it’s a Text this right here it doesn’t make any Sense to have the headline here text Here this is typical traditional website Design art what i would recommend Instead is have simple if you do it to The side align it to the left have an Image to the right Headline what you do and then a button In a different color now if you have Everything in the middle you can have a Background image and i don’t know if you Have a The background right here Okay so it’s not it’s just on repeat i Think so the bigger the screen the more We see of them again maybe you can be More creative there with funnels maybe Have some funnels in the background or Design elements or copywriting it could Be 3d illustrations but you would have a Main headline if it’s centered you have The text below it centered as well and Then the button centered below that and You have equal spacing 30 pixels there 30 pixels there
Tighter working photo in your business Again change the font Is this two different fonts yes so I’m sorry you failed the test i’m just Kidding these are easy fixes so by the Way don’t feel bad when i give you Advice like easy fixes they make a big Difference in your next build are you Looking to convert more leads into sales With automation again look at this right Here i feel like i’m reading a billboard I have to go here and then i go all the Way here to read it you want it to be so Like this for example why not make this Bigger Why not have a section Where like here for example big image Got a two three line headline And then short text And you can definitely do that by just Practicing how to write more in less Lesser words i looking to convert more Leads into cells with automation you Could instead put something like convert More leads into sales with automation World of funnels or solar focus helping You design and implement okay so instead Of saying we’re solely so slowly focused On helping you design implement the best Business acquisition or automation Process possible for a business which by The way i don’t know why you’re using Uh capital p on pr possible So um these things again
Minor details but you could instead say At world of funnels we build the best Client acquisition and automation Funnels in uh for business owners like Yourself We work you and your team to understand Where the key areas of opportunity are In email market sales funnels the key Areas of opportunity okay how we Implement better systems improve your Efficiency with automation because it More relates to high value sales and Repeat customers So all of this you could say Our services include everything from Funnel design to copywriting Tech integrations And your entire email sequence so that You have an automated sales funnels that Work for you 24 7. that’s pretty much What you do identifying the key area of Opportunity To implement better systems improve your Efficiency with automation so like you Could help me improve my efficiency with Automation as a coach as a consultant But when i say actually what i could say Is we’re gonna identify where you’re Leaving money on the table see i talk I’m from finland so my english is you Know it’s crap so when i talk to people I talk to them like they’re kids like They’re super young and it’s not Complicated at all that’s why people
Understand me a lot of white spacing Here just make sure that it has equal Spacing Everywhere benefits using customer Acquisition Agency now we’re talking more specific Specifically what you do And so Again customer acquisition business Automation I feel like the shadow is too Hard or too sharp so make that smoother Copywriting I always again i like to have the Headlines two lines so customer Acquisition business automation Copywriting services this hurts my eyes As well with uh the button so again i Would change the font all right use the Same font as here but change this one as Well change this then use that one here So i’ll just make it Smaller so if this is 42 pixels make This 26 or 32 And then this could be 18 16 20 not this font and then add a Shadow behind these three individually To show step one two three how healthy Is your business Take the test and that’s pretty much it So now we’re gonna pick a winner and Before i tell you who i think won who Did you like the most just put it in the Comment below which one you like the
Most i don’t think it’s a secret anymore Maybe you saw me react to reactive Growth to be honest i think this one Beats all the other funnels by far this One is actually a funnel to sell their Services it’s very specific let’s talk Claim your free talk book your Call with us to talk here’s what we do Here’s what we’ve done here’s everything Included here’s the truth here’s why you Need us here’s why you fail here’s our Simple process it pretty much has Everything it really does and if there’s Anything missing it’s obviously their Sales funnel here And then if we take a look and compare It To This one they don’t have credibility or Pr Which you don’t necessarily have to have But if you can add it in there you could Do that did we have testimonials so no Testimonials so you can add testimonials And also logos of people or brands that You worked with so like i could put Clickfunnels In this brand and robert kiyosaki and so Put like the biggest names that people Actually recognize in your space in your Industry in your niche all right so That’s it for the video today make sure You like the video if you want to see More of these because that’s how i know
That you like these funnel feedback Videos if you want to learn how we Design photos like this and you actually Want to see me build them live redesign Funnels and actually give you more In-depth of the nine different pillars Of the funnels that we build for all Types of industries or maybe you want to Do this as a business yourself you want To join us in building these making Money from home as a funnel agency Funnel designer copywriter all of that Good stuff we do that at full-time Funnel designer and now full-time Fundamental 2.0 is out as well so you Get the most fresh proven to work Concepts that are working today and not Five years ago so that said love you all And i’ll see you in the next one [Music] You
